Thursday, December 15, 2011

How people’s differences in their definitions of success influence their lives.

  There are different definitions of success. And, there are successful people in the world. Bill Gates is consistently ranked among the world's wealthiest people and was the wealthiest overall from 1995 to 2009, excluding 2008, when he was ranked third. Albert Einstein is the father of modern physics and one of the most prolific intellects in human history. Everyone wants to be successful in some way. Michael Jordan, the greatest basketball player of all time, proposes that “I've failed over and over and over again in my life and that is why I succeed.Abraham Lincoln, a champion for human liberty, proposes that“Always bear in mind that your own resolution to succeed is more important than any one thing.” Because of people’s differences in their definitions of success, people are divided into three categories, Puritan, materialist and contributor.

People who follow the puritan mindset work in order to prove themselves. They believe that to be successful, they need to show their value. Helen Keller is one of the people who struggle for proving their value. She can just give up and stop struggling. However she wants to prove that even a disable person has value. She gets in the fight against illness, her spirit and her extraordinary successful experience have been inspired many normal person and disabled people to confront and overcome the difficulties. The reason that people are eager to prove their value is that they regard self -worth as the icon of success. As soon as they reach an achievement, they get more sense of worthiness, and there is always another goal they need to get. Therefore, we see many “puritan” busy with their work. There is a band called “Yes” says that “Prove yourself, you are the move you make, take your chances win or loser.” It obviously represents the importance of “proving myself ” for “puritan”

People who grow up on the material view of success tend to be crazy about money or possessions. This kind of people want to gain as much luxury and money as possible. They will never be satisfied with current situation. It is because they believe that successful people have this stuff therefore they need to have this stuff. They do not realize that successful people can enjoy luxury because they have already succeed, however normal people who have succeed yet should work harder instead of blindly seeking of material. We usually connect materialism to realism. For example, a couple divorce only because one of them is not satisfied with their financial status. Smokey Robinson says As human beings, we're very materialistic and have all this stuff - furs and cars and diamonds and money.

There is a kind of people who would like to sacrifice themselves to make the world a better place. They are different from “Puritan” because they strive for others. They are different from materialistic people because they work for a better world. They are the ones who really have value because they come to the world and really make some difference. The contributors believe that as long as they make the world better, even a bit better, it is successful. There is a person we will never forget, Mother Teresa. For over 45 years, she ministered to the poor, sick, orphaned, and dying, while guiding the Missionaries of Charity's expansion, first throughout India and then in other countries. Once, she said that “The good you do today, people will often forget tomorrow; Be good anyway.” Although we may not be able to do things like Mother Teresa did, we can simply be willing to help people through their everyday struggles.

In conclusion, people’s different understandings on success classify people into self-value persons, possession persons, helpful persons. Are there any other sorts of opinions about success? Is it possible that somehow self-value persons have agreement with helpful persons? It is clear that there are some negative understandings among people. To correct individuals’ opinion about success, we must make our citizen receive correct view of success by producing relevant films, and so on. We have seen some negative opinions about success. If more and more negative opinions arise, fewer and fewer people will succeed. It is time for you to think about what success means to you.

1 comment:

  1. A good essay that shows the efforts in learning and applying the academic writing framework. The thesis statement is adequate, but the topic sentences should not be definitions (Puritan and Materialistic paragraphs). The topic sentence for Contributor paragraph would have been good, but since the topic of the paragraph is on contributor type success, it should be featured in that topic sentence as well.

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